Show Don't Tell - Preparation for group meeting

We're back. I can't wait to share some of the info on what's happening in the publishing world.

Ashley's article on Show don't Tell is perfect. I wish it had been explained clearly to me from the beginning. I finally get it. :)

Please send your first page or 500 words to one another. This means- send a copy to everyone on the list. Then examine one anothers work, looking especially for show don't tell. Caviat. There is a time for telling and we will be discussing that. Bring your comments on Tuesday. Shoot for having them e-mailed by the beginning of this weekend.

I feel this is one of the most important aspects to great writing. In the examples it becomes clear the powerful difference made by showing. God bless you guys. I look forward to our meeting at Bev's next tuesday.

Thanks! Dan